Monday, February 10, 2014

Bridgette - Chapter Twenty Four: One More Day



Warning, there may be some images that some might find disturbing. Maybe not, but I thought I’d put that warning out there. Also, you might want to grab a tissue. I needed several when I was typing this chapter.  You’ll understand why I went ahead and posted both the last chapter and the epilogue together since it would have just been too cruel to leave you with this chapter. : ) I've provided the song that inspired this chapter at a point where the lyrics are given. If you'd like, you can listen to it while you scroll through the pictures. I’ll have more to say at the end.  . .

*****




 
It was a cold fall day and I was standing in the kitchen, waiting for Carson to come home when my phone rang. My phone rang more times than I could count during the day. Sometimes it was Mom, sometimes it was one of the kids asking me to bring them something they forget. Other times it was someone inquiring about a painting or drawing class. Some days it was Kate wanting to chat or make a lunch date so we could get together. Sometimes it was Jeff wondering if I wanted to walk across the field to his house since he basically lived right next door. Annoyingly, sometimes it was a solicitor who I would just hang up on. As I looked at the number, I realized it wasn’t anyone I knew so I figured it was either a solicitor or someone inquiring about a class. I sighed. The last thing I wanted to do right now was talk to someone about a class since Carson was due home any minute now.



 I slid my finger across the screen to ignore the call and went back to trying to figure out what we could eat for dinner. Trev would need something substantial after football practice and with two other teenage boys in the house, we needed lots of whatever it was going to be. I opened up the fridge and started taking inventory of what we had when I felt my phone buzz again. I looked down at it again and noticed that it was the same number that had called a minute earlier. I was getting a little annoyed by that point but since they were calling again, I figured it at least wasn’t a telemarketer. I sighed again and answered the phone.



“Hello?” I tried not to sound as annoyed as I actually was.


“Mrs. Davila?” A man asked.



 “Yes? This is Mrs. Davila; how can I help you?”


“Is this Mrs. Davila, wife of Carson Alexander Davila?”



“Yes.” I said with a little annoyance. It seemed odd that a man would ask such a question.


“Mrs. Davila, I’m officer Whittinger. I’m calling to inform you that your husband has been involved in a car accident and has been rushed to the hospital. . .” Everything else the officer said went in one ear, and out the other. I could hear him talking but it was almost like he was speaking a different language.


“Mrs. Davila? Did you hear what I said.”


 “I’m. . .sorry. . .did you say Carson was in an accident?” In my shock I thought maybe I had heard him wrong.


“Yes ma’am and he’s been rushed to the hospital. A police car should be arriving at your house any minute to rush you there.” Right at that moment I heard a siren and a moment later there was a knock at the door. “Mrs. Davila, has the officer arrived at your house.”



“Yes. . .” 


“He will take you to the hospital. You need to hurry.” When he told me I needed to hurry I hung up the phone and ran out the front door. The police officer helped me get into the police car and sped out of the driveway. I somehow had the mindset to call Mom.





“Hey Bridge! What’s up?”


“Carson. . .accident. . .hospital.” It was all I could get out in between the gasps of air.


 “We’ll get the kids and meet you there.”


I sat in the police car watching familiar sights go by in a hazy blur thinking that maybe this was just some bad nightmare and I would wake up any second.  But I wasn’t waking up and the sinking feeling in my stomach just kept getting worse and worse.


The police car pulled up to the hospital and the police officer walked around to my side of the car and helped me out. We hurriedly walked through the doors and a doctor was there to meet us. As we walked he talked to me.


“Mrs. Davila? I’m Dr. Royce. Your husband was involved in an accident with another car that pulled out in front of him. He was seriously injured in the accident.”


“But he’s going to be okay, right?” I looked at the doctor pleading with him to tell me that my husband was going to be okay. We stopped in front of a set of doors and he looked very calmly at me.


“Mrs. Davila, I can’t make that promise. All I can tell you is that we will do everything we can to help him. He’s in this room and we’re getting ready to take him into surgery but he has been asking for you, and under the circumstances. . .I think you should see him. I will warn you, he has many cuts and bruises so prepare yourself. Try to keep him calm but please hurry; once they’ve gotten him ready for surgery, they’ll wheel him away.”


I nodded and took a deep breath as the doctor held the door open. I thought I had prepared myself for what Carson would look like, but nothing could have prepared me for what I saw. As I walked closer to the bed, I saw someone who was covered in cuts and bruises who unless he hadn’t had Carson’s hair, I never would have known it was him. I closed my eyes and tried to muster my courage.








“Mrs. Davila, you need to hurry.” I heard the doctor whisper urgently from behind me. I silently nodded and walked closer to the bed. When I got next to him I extended my shaking hand and grabbed hold of his. His eyes flickered several times before he was able to concentrate on me.



“Bridge.” I could barely hear him and he looked like it was painful for him to talk.


“Shh. It’s okay, you don’t have to talk.” I was using every ounce of will power to try not to cry. I stroked the top of his head with my other hand and smiled at him.


He licked his lips and swallowed several times. He closed his eyes like he was concentrating really hard and then quickly opened them back up and looked at me. “Tell the kids I love them.”


“NO! Don’t you do this. You can tell them yourself when you get out of surgery. Do you hear me Carson Alexander Davila! Do not leave us! Do not give up!”


He smiled weakly at me. “My fiery, beautiful, gorgeous wife.” He swallowed again and then coughed. “I love you.”


“Stop it Carson! You promised me that we would always be together!” 


He tried to smile at me. “We will beautiful. I’ll always be with you.” He shut his eyes, his grip on my hand became limp, and a bunch of machines started beeping. Before I knew what was happening I was being pushed to the side and it felt like someone picked me up. I looked around and there was a male nurse who was almost carrying me out of the room. I turned around and looked back at where Carson was laying and thought I heard the sound of someone screaming as the doors closed. The nurse was trying to get me to calm down and it was then that I realized that I was the one screaming and crying uncontrollably.






“Mrs. Davila, you need to stay here. When we know anything, someone will come out and tell you.” He looked over my shoulder and nodded. Right as I saw the nurse walk back into the room, I felt someone place their arm around my shoulders as I started crying They helped me to the chairs that were right outside the room and that’s when I looked over and saw that the arm belonged to Jeff. He had seen the police car at our house and followed it to the hospital.








He sat there with his arm around me and I started to hear him talking. At first I thought he was talking to someone else but there wasn’t anyone else there.  I was in too much of a shock to comprehend what he was saying. It was like I had earplugs in my ears and could only hear muffled sounds.  I remember looking up at some point and seeing Charlie and Kate standing there. They were also trying to talk to me but all I could do was continue staring at the door, waiting for someone to walk through with news about Carson. Eventually I noticed Mom and Dad come in and that’s when I saw the kids followed immediately by Carson’s parents.  At the sight of the kids I started losing it again. I walked up to them and hugged them. 




“What is it, Mom? What’s wrong with Dad?” Trev asked.


Jeff came over and told the kids about the accident and that we were waiting to hear news about Carson. 


“But he’s going to be okay, right Mom?” Charlotte begged. How could I look into my children’s eyes and tell them what I had seen in that room. I just did what I could, and continued to hug each of them.


It felt like we waited an eternity before the doctor came out and he seemed shocked by the number of people standing there waiting. He must not have seen me at first since he called out my name. “Mrs. Davila?” I let go of the kids and somehow found the will to walk over to him. He pulled me over to the side and opened his mouth to say something but stopped himself. I noticed he looked over my shoulder, nodded, and then quickly looked back at me.


“Mrs. Davila, as you know your husband came in here with multiple serious injuries. While you were in the room he went into cardiac arrest and while we made every effort to revive him. . .we were unable to do so. . .” He kept talking but I didn’t hear anything after that. I remember by knees buckling and someone holding me while I cried out. 










I vaguely remembered walking out of the hospital but the next thing I clearly remembered was waking up in Carson’s and my bed and looking around. Everything was quiet. I jolted into a sitting position and listened for a noise. I looked down and saw that I was wearing the clothes I had worn earlier in the day but I wasn’t sure if everything had actually happened or if I had dreamt it. I heard the sound of a man talking on the other side of the bedroom door and I got hopeful as I stood up. I watched as the door knob slowly turned and held my breath as I watched to see who would walk through the door.  I took a deep breath in and immediately felt my heart sink as I saw Jeff walk through the door. 






“NO JEFF! NO! IT WAS A DREAM!! PLEASE TELL ME IT WAS A DREAM!!!!!” 




He rushed over to me and hugged me. “Bridge. Shh. I’m sorry you woke up alone. I heard a commotion downstairs and I was peaking downstairs to see what was going on.”


It was like someone poked me with a cattle prod; that jolted me out of what I was feeling and made me think of the kids. I started to think maybe something had happened to one of the them. “The kids?!” 


“They’re okay. They’re downstairs with everyone else.” 

“I need to go down there.” I started to walk past him and he grabbed my arm before I could leave the room.


“Bridge, wait. They’re really hurting right now. I don’t want to sound. . .cold, but they need you to be strong right now. I know you’re hurting but as much as we’ve tried to comfort them, they just want you.” I nodded and swallowed hard. I took a deep breath and squared my shoulders before walking downstairs.




The next several days went by in a blur. Carson and I had never made funeral plans so I was faced with making all the arrangements.   No matter where I went, someone was always with me; whether it was Jeff, Kate, Charlie, Mom or Dad; and someone was always with the kids. The kids were taking time off from school and their teachers had even sent home their schoolwork so they could do it when they were able so they wouldn’t fall behind. Trev’s teammates and coaches had stopped by  the house along with other classmates the kids had. It was nice to know people cared but eventually we just wanted to be left alone to deal with our grief privately.


As bad as the kids and I felt, I watched as the rest of the family grieved over losing Carson too. Everyone had always loved him so it was difficult for them to deal with their grief while also trying to be there for the kids and me. Out of the rest of the family, Charlie took it the worst. When he was with me he would sometimes just reach over and grab my hand. He would get giant tears in his eyes and stare straight ahead. Sometimes Mom would walk into the living room and see us like that and she would leave the room quickly. She would try to hide her grief from me but I could sometimes hear her somewhere in the house crying.







The day of the funeral arrived and I prayed for the strength to make it through the day. It had been decided that Trev and I would say some words at the service and even though I had initially offered to speak, I was starting to second guess myself. The kids filed into the kitchen right when it was time to leave and I gave them all a weak smile. I gave each of them a reassuring hug before we all walked outside to the cars. We walked outside and saw Jeff and Dad who were driving us to the family cemetery.  One thing that Mom and Dad had done several years ago was to buy the land next to them. When we kids first found out about it we asked them what they had planned to do with it. We were all shocked when they told us it was for a family cemetery. At the time I thought it was silly, but I actually found that laying Carson’s body to rest there brought me a little peace at a time when I needed any shred of peace I could grab on to.  As the cars pulled up to the cemetery, I looked over at Jeff and he reached over and squeezed my hand.



 

As I stepped out of the car I looked up at the sky. It was a bright sunny day and for late fall, it was decently warm. The trees were beautiful shades of orange, red and yellow. I looked where everyone had gathered. The sight around the casket was completely different than what we had seen the night before. At the viewing, there was almost no room to move. A decent number of Carson’s previous physical therapy patients showed up to offer their condolences. There were his co-workers, coaches from high school and college that he worked with, his extended family, people we went to high school with, the kids classmates, teachers, coaches; I had never talked to so many people in one night. But this day, there were only our families present.  We had opted to have a graveside service so there were chairs sitting out. I saw Carson’s parents and his brothers  and I gave each of them a hug. I listened to all of them cry but I couldn’t even cry anymore; I felt like I could, but nothing would come out. As I was finishing talking with Carson’s family, I felt a hand on my arm and turned to see Charlie. “It’s time.” He told me but he couldn’t look me in the eyes. I made sure the kids found their seats and I sat down next to them waiting for the service to start.







I stared at the coffin as the minister spoke.  I was sure he was saying something nice but I couldn’t concentrate on what he was saying. I continued to sit there, staring at the coffin; it was all I could do.  I still had moments where I wondered if this wasn’t a nightmare and I would soon wake up in Carson’s and my bed with him laying next to me; holding me. The only thing that snapped me back to reality was seeing the movement of Trev getting up to speak. 


He walked up to the podium and looked down at the sheet of paper he had taken up with him. He stood there for a minute looking down at the paper before he started to speak.
 



****Trevor****




I knew when I had offered to speak at Dad’s service that it was going to be hard, but I never really knew how hard it would be until I got up there to speak. I looked down at my paper for a minute, trying to push back the tears that were on the brink of falling. I took a deep breath and looked up.


“A couple months ago, we took a trip to Paradise Island.” I actually felt myself smile thinking about it. “I was standing on the beach with Dad and we were having one of our “father/son talks.” We had those quite often and I’m sure any of my siblings would admit to having them with dad too.” I noticed that all three of them nodded. “I think this one will stick in my mind the most though since it was the last one we had. What was always the underlying theme in all the talks we had was to be true to yourself. Be who you are no matter what anyone else thinks about you, and no matter what life throws at you; if you do that,  you’ll be okay. I think his and Mom’s relationship and marriage was a testament to that. They never sacrificed who they were for each other but instead loved each other for who they were.  That’s the legacy he leaves behind. We’ll miss you Dad, but we’ll be true to ourselves and carry on your legacy.” I grabbed my paper and sat back down. Charlotte grabbed my hand and we both started crying.




****Charlotte****




I was crying hard after Trev finished but I was more mad than sad. I kept looking at the coffin and all I wanted to do was scream at Dad for leaving us. Then I would have this guilty feeling for being mad at him.  I kept going back and forth and I started to wonder just how we were all supposed to get through this. It was so unfair and I just wanted to scream at the whole world and let them know how mad I was. I hated to admit it, but I was glad the person in the other car had died.  They didn’t deserve to live after what they put us through. I looked back over at the coffin and started getting mad at Dad again. Was this pain and anger ever going to go away?




****William****




I sat there staring off into space during the service.  All I wanted to do the last several days was to sleep, read, and write. Reading and writing was the only thing that took my mind off the pain I was feeling. For a brief moment, when I was reading or writing, the pain would disappear. I could escape into a different world and forget what was going on around me. I sat there wishing I could just lock myself in my room and shut out the rest of the world.  The only thing that made me want to come back to reality was being there for Mom, Trev, Charlotte, and George. Without them, I would have been happy vanishing and wallowing in my own grief.




****George****




Having worked at the crisis center I knew what the stages of grief were but I was floored by how powerful they were. I had seen many people come into the center who were dealing with grief and I thought I understood what they were going through. What all this had taught me was that I had had no idea. I looked at Trev, Charlotte and Will and it seemed like we were all in different stages of grief;  denial, anger, bargaining,  and depression .   There was one stage that I knew would take each of us a long time to reach and that was acceptance.  I had already suggested that we all get counseling to Mom and she had agreed that after some time had passed that it was a good idea.  I noticed Mom get up and we all turned our attention to her.




****Bridge****








I walked up to the podium and, just like Trev, I also had a piece of paper that I had written some words on. I looked down at what I had written out and  I wasn’t sure I wanted to share it with anyone. It wasn’t like what Trev had spoken, instead it was more like a poem about a dream I had had a couple nights before. I looked at Kate who I had told what I had written, and like she always did, she read my mind and nodded for me to continue.





 


“Last night, I had a crazy dream.




A wish was granted just for me;



it could be for anything.



I didn’t ask for money, or a mansion in Malibu.



I simply wished for one more day with you.




One more day; one more time.





One more sunset maybe I’d be satisfied.



But then again, I know what it would do;



It’d leave me wishing still for one more day with you. One more day.



The first thing I’d do, is pray for time to crawl.



I’d unplug the telephone, keep the TV off.



I’d hold you every second, say a million “I love yous.”



That’s what I’d do with one more day with you.



One more day; one more time.



One more sunset maybe I’d be satisfied.



But then again, I know what it would do;



It’d leave me wishing still for one more day with you.


One more day; one more time.


One more sunset maybe I'd be satisfied.


But then again, I know what it would do;


It'd leave me wishing still for one more day. . .


Leave me wishing still for one more day. . .


Leave me wishing still for one more day. . .


. . .With you. ”





I let out a huge sigh and folded the piece of paper as I made my way back to my chair. Right as I sat down, the wind blew and I felt something on my left shoulder and for a brief moment, I could have sworn I smelled Carson’s cologne.  . .




*****

I feel like I need to explain why I did this. This has always been how Bridge's story would end; and while I didn't want to give it away, there were very subtle hints and foreshadowing that occurred throughout  Bridge's story. This provides the next generation with a direction that I felt they needed to go.  Bridge will still be in their stories and both her and Carson will be in Jeff's story from time to time. So they won't be gone forever. =D I did try to give a somewhat happy ending with the epilogue. I'm glad so many readers came to love Carson! I hope you don't want to hurt me too badly.  Thank you so much for reading!


Credits:
Poses:
Kiddo's Dreams - In the Hospital
Cloudwalker Sims - Family Photos Pose Pack
Delight 33 - 12 Poses at Table
Studio K2 - Casual Male
Bangsain - Funeral Poses


 

20 comments:

  1. Wow, This really came as a surprise. I wasnt expecting it at all.
    I read your warning and figured I would be fine but when I read Bridgette's poem I completely lost it.

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. I figured it would be a surprise. In a way, I kind of wanted it to be so people could hopefully experience the emotions as Bridge did.

      From the beginning I've always known how Bridge's story was going to unfold but what took me by surprise was, through writing his character and getting in his head, how Carson worked his way into my heart. I really tried to do his character justice because I knew how his story was going to end.

      I have always loved the song that I used as Bridge's poem and I listen to music as I write chapters and this was always the song I had in mind for this chapter. So when it came time for me to write it, the song had become such a part of it that I wanted to include it in some way. That's also what chocked me up. Especially when I put the pictures in for the chapter.

      Thank you so much for reading and commenting! I really, truly appreciate it!

      Delete
  2. Okay I need an address so I know where to send my therapy bill too...seriously though. What an amazing chapter, sad but beautiful. I didn't expect Carson to die, I really didn't. I was so hoping for a close call but I see why you needed to do it for the next generation. Ahhh the feels though. Lost it during the song which was a perfect choice btw. All the flashback memory pics were beautiful and I did cry. Lol.

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Well, you could send the bill to George when he becomes a psychologist. . . ; )

      Wow, thank you so much. I can't tell you how much that means to me. I have to be honest, I was a little worried about this chapter and the epilogue. I was worried people would read it and be like "Oh well, he's gone." because I didn't write it well enough.

      I did the close call with Amanda and although I'm good with how her story ended, I wouldn't have been happy with this generation ending like that. They all, Bridge and the kids relied so much on him that the next generation needs to figure out who they are without his influence.

      Thank you! I really enjoyed going through their older pictures but when I put them into the chapter and then played the song while scrolling through them (to make sure it looked okay) I lost it. I've looked at it several times just for editing purposes and I will sometimes scroll past that part. It's sometimes too hard for me to look at them in that context.

      Thank you so much for reading and commenting, Amandralynn! I always appreciate your comments!

      Delete
  3. That does suck that Carson died, especially since it took him and Bridge so long to get together in the first place. I bet Bridge is now kicking herself that she held off on her feelings for him for so long. Mm Jeff with stubble... *dies from the sight*

    That song was perfect for this funeral, and I loved the memory pictures you put in. You were always going to have Carson die? Awww, XD. Boy Sims always work their handsome faces into my heart,so it'd be harder for me to kill them than a girl Sim, LOL.

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Yeah, hopefully their children will not be so hesitant when they find love. Bridge has been kicking herself since they got together. But that time that Carson was with Waverly really knocked some sense into her and, in my mind, it would have taken them even longer if that hadn't have happened, and may not have happened at all. The character studies for both will go into more detail about some of their behavior.

      Yes, Jeff grows some stubble in the future and. . .well, there is actually a big spoiler in the funeral pictures. That's all I'm going to say. You can go back and look if you want but I wouldn't look too hard if you don't want to know what happens in Jeff's future. . .

      Aww, thank you! I find that a lot of times music helps in writing their stories and it definitely helped in writing this chapter. =D

      Yup, even as far back as the generation two heir vote I knew what Bridge's and Carson's stories were going to be. Sometimes I'd be getting pictures for a chapter and I'd look at Carson and think "Sorry, dude!" and I imagined he'd say "It's cool. Just as long as you reunite me with her, it's all good." I'm crazy, I know. Hahaha!

      Another reason to make uglier guy sims. . .What am I saying!!! There's never a reason for that! LOL! Oh there have been several girls I've wanted to kill off. .

      Thanks for reading and commenting, LateKnight! You'll still see Carson in Jeff's story every once in awhile. And I promise, Jeff isn't going anywhere! He's got a very long life ahead of him. :)

      Delete
  4. DUDE! You killed him!? What subtle hints?? (Clearly, I missed ALL OF THEM!) Well, I did wonder what all those one-on-one conversations were about, but I never expected this! Off to go wallow is self absorbed pity.

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Yeah. . .I'm going to include the very, and I mean they were very subtle hints in his character study. It was more of if you knew then you'd pick it up. Sometimes it was more of a wording choice that I made. I didn't want it to be obvious but just enough to think, "why did he say it like that?" or "Hmm, that's interesting." Those kinds of things. Not that you would read it and go "He's going to die!"

      Are you talking about the one-on-ones he had with the kids? Because that was something. The whole second half of the chapter was either a child's point of view or his. But even from the kids point of views, they interacted with Carson, not Bridge. That's one of those things that I thought people might think "Why are we only getting interactions with Carson and why all the advice?"

      I'm really so glad that people liked him so much. I really didn't know till recently that people liked him so much. But he will be available for download early next week. So he can live on in others' games. =D

      Thank you so much Blythelyre for reading and commenting! I really appreciate it!

      Delete
  5. Ok so I've posted before how I've come close to tears, It's hard for me to cry and not much can do it for example only one film can make me cry (just like heaven) and today with your forewarning about tissues I didn't think I'd need any because it takes a lot for me to cry but omg even now I'm blubbering like a baby. I don't hate you for this, it's an amazing chapter like those that have come before, you pull us in with emotions that we feel from reading your stories and it makes them that more enjoyable and one of the many reasons we keep coming back. I love all the pictures and Bridge's reading, the kids are all amazing and you can feel the love and support from those in the family and friends and the love that everyone has for Carson. Well done for a fantastic chapter even though it's a sad one.

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Oh my! Thank you again for the kind words! I wrote this chapter about a week before it was published (the idea of it was in my head for much, much longer) and I still have trouble reading it. I really wasn't sure if people who read would feel the way I did about these characters and I almost feel bad that I didn't hint more about the ending.

      Thank you again! I'm glad you've enjoyed their story!

      Delete
  6. Sorry the film that makes me blubber like a baby is actually called ~ A little bit of heaven with goldie hawns daughter and whoopi Goldburg but yes I loved this soo much

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. I haven't seen that one. I have a really long list of movies I'd like to see but haven't had time to. I'll have to put that on my list.
      :)

      Delete
  7. :( That was a surprise. I did not expect that to happen in this chapter. I guess life is cruel like that; when things are going too well, something bad is bound to happen. Sigh. And I thought they had the perfect love. Well they did, although it was cut short. :( Hopefully Bridge will make it through and be able to provide support for her and Carson's kids. I wonder if she will remarry someday (don't tell me lol, just pondering!).

    On a side note, good job with the funeral! I imagine it must have taken a long time to assemble the setting and get everyone sitting properly in their chairs! We all know how disobedient those sims can get when it comes to gatherings.

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Yeah, this was sad. He was a great character and I do miss writing for him. He became a huge part of Bridge's story which was awesome but made this ending a little harder to write.

      Bridge's character study answers the question about whether she marries again. :) So if you don't want to know, you might want to skip it.

      Thank you! The funeral was crazy! It took about half a day to get people dressed right, possed and then sitting in the right spots. Once it was all together, it took like five minutes to shoot the pictures. Hours of work for a handful of pictures. LOL!

      I had several disobedient sims, one of them being Bridge. Jeff caused some problems too for some reason. :)

      Thanks for reading and commenting, Emerain!

      Delete
  8. I still crying as I'm trying to type, omg how could you do this to Carson this is just too sad can't type anymore

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. :( Hands over the tissues. I honestly didn't think people would react that way I knew I was sad, but I figured it was because I wrote him.

      I'm sorry, the epilogue makes it a little better. . . :)

      Then there's George. :) He helps make it better.

      Thanks for reading Lckygrl!

      Delete
  9. Okies. I was going back and re-reading chapters and noticed I've been a brat about commenting. I read and just go on to the next chapter without taking any time to reflect or just give you the accolades you deserve. So, I promise to be better about commenting after reading in the future.

    This chapter is by far my FAVORITE of all your chapters. I know that may seem a little twisted - since I obviously didn't want Carson to die - especially with something as senseless and random as a car crash. But, that's how life happens. Not everything's scripted to turn out exactly the way it aught to.

    I really felt like you did a fabulous job not only of narrating Bridge's grief and loss, but spending time with each child and really developing them in the last chapter and this one - showing how this effected them and helped shape the people they'd eventually grow up to be. I love that each of your children are fully developed - I know you leave your heirs up to a vote so you have to have stories fleshed out for each of them, but I also know that sometimes as a writer you (or at least for me I) just WANT to follow one of the characters so badly that I let other characters go completely undeveloped. I also ADORE that you stepped out of continuity and gave us the epilogue afterward. It really gave me the closure I needed to move past loosing such an awesome character. It also makes it far more comfortable to do the time jump you did. I see the necessity of that as well - since you wouldn't want to dwell in the next few years of their lives, which will be completely colored by their grief. But, you definitely gave Carson the send off he deserved. I feel like if you'd immediately moved on to the time jump I would have felt jilted. I would have felt like you just killed him off and didn't care about him - it would just be too cold and calculated at that point (even if in a way you have to think like that as an author... I'm rambling now, but I think you know what I'm trying to get at).

    I'm not going to go back and post for all the previous chapters like I should have - since I'm too lazy and far too long-winded for that, but I wanted to make sure I came back and said something here. I figured I should make sure I said SOMETHING at least for my favorite chapter so far.

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Oh my goodness! Thank you so much!! I'm still amazed that people feel so strongly about Carson. I honestly thought that since I had gotten into his head and written his story that I was the only one who fell in love with him. I'm so glad that others felt that way about him too.

      This chapter is still hard for me to read. And if I play the song with it. . .I'm a crying, bawling mess.

      I appreciate any comments and I always enjoy reading yours. :)

      This was by far the easiest chapter for me to write. Not emotionally but from a writing perspective. I sat down and it was written in less than an hour. All the words were just waiting to be written. I felt really bad that Scarlett had gotten left out of the previous generation and I vowed to not do that again. No more forgotten children. lol.

      I had to do the epilogue, just for my own peace of mind. I needed that closure and as I was writing this chapter, I kept apologizing to Carson and I just kept envisioning him saying. "Just let me have her back in the end." So that's what I did.

      I really didn't want to dwell too much on the next several years with the kids. I figured that even though we didn't see them during those years, that the pain and loss that they felt then would be evident even years down the road.

      I will never just kill a character off. There will always be a reason why and if that does happen, they will always have a decent send off. I'm too sentimental to not do that. :)

      Thank you again for the incredibly kind words! And thank you so much for reading and commenting on this story!

      Delete
  10. OMG - I should have taken your warning seriously about needing tissues! I suspected that Carson's time was short after reading the last chapter. All those one on one conversations between the kids just felt like he was saying goodbye. I didn't want to believe it and feel like Bridge wanting it to be all a bad dream.

    Jeff is a good brother, taking care of Bridge the way he did. I know the rest of the family was there too but I think Jeff was really there for her.

    Awesome chapter as always!

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Aww, I always have mixed emotions when people say they get emotional from reading this chapter. I'm glad that Carson seemed to touch people but I really didn't think people would be upset. I just thought I was upset because I was in his head and Bridge's head for so long. :D

      I did that on purpose. I wanted to really show how Carson was as a dad so readers would understand just how much losing him would impact their lives. He was really a stabilizing force in all of their lives.

      Jeff and Bridge are incredibly close. Even more than she and Charlie. You see how he is there for her in this chapter but also a little bit in the next generation too. There's things that happened with Jeff that Bridge was there for him too but those will be revealed in his story eventually. :)

      Thank you so much for the kind words! I really appreciate them. :)

      Thanks again for reading and commenting, DandyLion!

      Delete